Nice Work Dominic! This is very nice. I like the font and the background blue. I learnt that not walking your dog has a correlation to digging holes or eating couches or being potato couches. I think next time you could use better grammar (Fullstops, Commas and others)
Hi Dominic I like the way you have pictures and next you should cheek your punctuation,did you think about changing your background because it is a bit hard to read.
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Nice Work Dominic! This is very nice. I like the font and the background blue.
ReplyDeleteI learnt that not walking your dog has a correlation to digging holes or eating couches or being potato couches. I think next time you could use better grammar (Fullstops, Commas and others)
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ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback ill use to inprove my work in the further
ReplyDeleteHi Dominic I like the way you have pictures and next you should cheek your punctuation,did you think about changing your background because it is a bit hard to read.
ReplyDeletehey Dominic if I had a dog I would do all the things you said
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