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Monday 25 June 2018

If i was in war

Members and the crew are outside preparing for the war to begin cannons are loaded Gun are packed
with amo the snipers are ready snipe enemies my crew holds there assault rifles in possession the
families are crying the soldiers are determined they all shout there war moto three times we might die
but we serve our country for delight`  they shout all the mums bake anzac biscuits and buy rice and
beans. All the soldiers including myself shere a tin of anzac biscuits on the boat as we sail across the
river for 5 hours. Back home the other 4,400 soldiers are locked loaded for the fight to begin. Our trip
finally come to a end when we spotted some guards BANG on shot from 10 men shooting 1 person he
died flat on floor pouring with blood people were shock nurse came right away soldiers never killed
ladies 10/5/18 or nurse only if they try to kill the soldiers first we hide our boat in a little cave our capit
tells as a update report we have clear view of the cameras showing us everything we defend the village
with ease the soldiers the enemies retreated  there was only 20 men left from the enemy team.


They  were relieved HEY! Shouted a guard what are you guys doing where are here to aa here to
aaaa see your king we. brought some food from the other tribe that we attacked our team was fight we
snatched some goods the guard knew they were lying so he asks to see the good I could tell he was
listening so he didn't get shot so from the bag my friend pulled out a pisel band in the head we jumped
out of the boat swam and swam as fast as we could the we hit shayar we climbed up shot a ton of
guards witch alerted a ton of villages all the
defence was locked on my bros we threw grenades and jumped we leaped on a little boat there were
2 all sailed away really quickly  we saw our boat get destroyed by missile damet said a couple of crew
members I asked what was wrong and they said we forgot to grab our bag that meant no amo no water
and no food so sped home the boat ran out of oil on the way and were stuck on the river for 10 minutes
then I saw a handel I pulled It and saw oil and water plus there was a ton of food to last a couple of days
even a month then a crew member sat on something hard it was the boat motor they stuck on this hook
at the back and motor was on the way back.we

Saw Another boat. but the soldiers on it had different weapons and their boat  was way bigger than than
the one we a stole and a escaped on it was the enemies that attempted to raid our village we tried to go
as fast as we could so they didn't see us suddenly HEY! Shouted the other person on the but this guy
was on the boat they a escaped but the enemy ship couldn't  catch up but then the gas ran out they
were floating in the middle of the ocean then pop the safety boat popped and that was the only thing
they do a escape some knew it was an arrow and the ship was too far behind either way they all knew
they were kinda dead so they said their goodbyes to each other then bang a anker dropped a wooden l
adder dropped they climbed aboard  their hands were tied up they had a choice the soldiers get shot
and die or jump into the ocean and drown or get eaten by a shark and that happened one by one none
wanted to be shot so they all jumped they decide to go in line that was good bye for them.

1 comment:

  1. Super writing! You worked with your teacher to ensure that it fit nicely on your blog. Next time you could add a description at the beginning about what your writing was for and why.

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